Kanehira and Doi, thank you for your role-play. I appreciate you learnt from the youtube demonstration and make your own script. Both of you are doing very well. The last sentence "Thank you for going to the trouble/travel"(?) is not so English, just "Thank you" is fine.

Nice job!! Please keep up the good work! この調子で頑張って。よかったです。お二人の顔が横に並ぶようにしていただけると見やすいです。縦と横になってしまっているので。