Hinami and Risa, thank you for your wonderful role plays! I liked both of them. Really natural and authentic. In the second one though, you need to state when you are going to pay back and get information of the classmate. Other than that, everything was so smooth and I really liked them. Great job!
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Apr 20, 2022
Hinami and Risa, thank you for your roleplays. Too polite in the short one (a), do not forget you two are close friends and you just borrow 20cents, do not need to say "I must return it to you tomorrow", otherwise it shows that you don't think she's your friend. And "how much would be not for you to buy this?" is not a correct expression, you may say "how much do you need (to buy this)?"
In the long one (e), I like the way the dialogue is laid out, knowing that you are a senior and a freshman. However, contrary to (a), you have forgotten to say "I will pay you back tomorrow/later." Remember your relationship when designing your dialogue. Keep it up!
Hinami and Risa, thank you for your wonderful role plays! I liked both of them. Really natural and authentic. In the second one though, you need to state when you are going to pay back and get information of the classmate. Other than that, everything was so smooth and I really liked them. Great job!
Hinami and Risa, thank you for your roleplays. Too polite in the short one (a), do not forget you two are close friends and you just borrow 20cents, do not need to say "I must return it to you tomorrow", otherwise it shows that you don't think she's your friend. And "how much would be not for you to buy this?" is not a correct expression, you may say "how much do you need (to buy this)?"
In the long one (e), I like the way the dialogue is laid out, knowing that you are a senior and a freshman. However, contrary to (a), you have forgotten to say "I will pay you back tomorrow/later." Remember your relationship when designing your dialogue. Keep it up!