Ako and Ayako, good job! The first dialogue was done naturally since you did it in front of the vending machine! (自販機の事をこういいます）It would be better to say, lend me, instead of give me when you want to borrow money. The second scenario, the reason to borrow money was given before you asked a favour, which is good! You might want to let the interlocutor (対話者の事をこういいます）to offer first without asking for the favour yourself. But all in all, your dialogues were well thought out and I liked both of them! :)
May, thank you for your comment!
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May LAM
Apr 20, 2022
Ako and Ayako, thank you for your roleplays. I like both roleplays, especially the (c), the dialogue is authentic and complete. The interaction is just right too. But I couldn't hear the latter part of (c), what the girl in white said clearly because you were wearing a mask. Next time it is better to find a quieter location. Good job and keep it up!
Ako and Ayako, good job! The first dialogue was done naturally since you did it in front of the vending machine! (自販機の事をこういいます）It would be better to say, lend me, instead of give me when you want to borrow money. The second scenario, the reason to borrow money was given before you asked a favour, which is good! You might want to let the interlocutor (対話者の事をこういいます）to offer first without asking for the favour yourself. But all in all, your dialogues were well thought out and I liked both of them! :)
May, thank you for your comment!
Ako and Ayako, thank you for your roleplays. I like both roleplays, especially the (c), the dialogue is authentic and complete. The interaction is just right too. But I couldn't hear the latter part of (c), what the girl in white said clearly because you were wearing a mask. Next time it is better to find a quieter location. Good job and keep it up!